[PATCH 2/3] Adds missing highlight and improves readability in Section 1

Tim Wootton tim at tee-jay.demon.co.uk
Tue Jul 29 15:54:48 PDT 2014


Signed-off-by: Tim Wootton <tim at tee-jay.demon.co.uk>
---
 Documentation/user-manual.txt | 11 +++++------
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
index 0c5ea6e..734768d 100644
--- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt
+++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ and Linux) or the top of the screen (for Mac and Ubuntu Unity). The four panels
 user's
 dive log. A dive can be selected and highlighted on the dive list by clicking on
 it. In most situations the up/down keys can be used to switch
-between dives. The Dive List is an important tool for manipulating a dive log.
+between dives. The *Dive List* is an important tool for manipulating a dive log.
 
 2. The *Dive Map* to the bottom right, showing the user's dive sites on a world
 map
@@ -83,10 +83,10 @@ highlighted dive(s).
 4. The *Dive Profile* to the top right, showing a graphical dive profile of the
 selected dive in the *Dive List*.
 
-The dividers can be dragged between panels in order to change the size of any of
+The dividers between panels can be dragged in order to change the size of any of
 the panels. _Subsurface_ remembers the position of the dividers, so the next
-time _Subsurface_ starts it uses the positions of the dividers when the program
-was executed previously.
+time _Subsurface_ starts it uses the positions of the dividers from when the program
+was last used.
 
 If a dive is selected in the *Dive List*, the dive location, detailed information
 and profile of
@@ -116,8 +116,7 @@ all highlighted dives.
 *Globe*: Show only the world map, centred on the last selected dive.
 
 Like many other functions that can be accessed via the Main Menu, these options
-can be triggered using keyboard shortcuts. The shortcuts for a
-particular system
+can be triggered using keyboard shortcuts. The shortcuts for a particular system
 are shown with an underline in the main menu entries. Since different Operating
 Systems and the user chosen language may cause _Subsurface_ to use different
 shortcut keys they are not listed here in the user manual.
-- 
2.0.1



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