[PATCH 2/3] Manual - make field edit decriptions consistent

Tim Wootton tim at tee-jay.demon.co.uk
Wed Jul 30 01:04:43 PDT 2014


Make descriptions of field editing consistent between the manually
added and DC imported sections. I preferred the DC section wording
on ratings.

Signed-off-by: Tim Wootton <tim at tee-jay.demon.co.uk>
---
 Documentation/user-manual.txt | 11 +++++++----
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
index 4f3d680..ddb0f9f 100644
--- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt
+++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
@@ -244,11 +244,12 @@ As with the other items, auto completion of the suit description is available.
 Some dry-suit users may choose to use this field to record what combination of
 suit and thermal protection undersuit was used.
 
-*Rating*: In this field, provide a subjective overall rating of the
-dive on a 5-point scale by clicking the appropriate star on the rating scale.
+*Rating*: One can provide a subjective overall rating of the dive on a
+5-point scale by clicking the appropriate star on the rating scale.
 
-*Visibility*: As with the previous item, provide a rating of
-visibility during the dive on a 5-point scale by clicking the appropriate star.
+*Visibility*: Similarly, one can provide a rating of visibility during the
+dive on a
+5-point scale by clicking the appropriate star.
 
 *Tags*: Tags that describe the type of dive performed may
 be entered here (separated by commas). Examples of common tags are boat, drift,
@@ -703,6 +704,8 @@ offered.
 
 *Suit*: Here the type of diving suit used for the dive can be entered.
 Auto completion of the suit description is available.
+Some dry-suit users may choose to use this field to record what combination of
+suit and thermal protection undersuit was used.
 
 *Rating*: One can provide a subjective overall rating of the dive on a
 5-point scale by clicking the appropriate star on the rating scale.
-- 
2.0.1



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