Subsurface-mobile v3 user manual

[Martin de Weger]

> Op 26 mrt. 2020, om 18:13 heeft Dirk Hohndel <dirk at hohndel.org> het volgende geschreven:
> 
> 
> Thanks, Martin...
> 
> On Thu, 2020-03-26 at 10:31 +0100, Martin de Weger wrote:
>> Hi Dirk,
>> 
>> Here are my remarks. Overall, it looks good (in my opinion ;) ).
> 
> 8-)
> 
>> Paragraph 2: iTunes Store is App Store (or Apple App Store)
> 
> Done

Looks good!

> 
>> Paragraph 3: could you put a hyperlink to the user forum in the text
>> (and have it open in a new tab of the browser)? New users might not
>> know where to find the forum. ;)
> 
> The "open in new tab" unfortunately isn't easily supported in asciidoc
> (which we use for document conversion - I may switch to asciidoctor
> when I have some spare time). But I added this link and correctly
> annotated another one that's already in the manual.

Works like a charm now. ;)

> 
>> Last sentence of paragraph 4 is missing an S in looks
> 
> I didn't find that. We have the word 'look' only twice in the mobile
> user manual:
> 
> This user interface has a slightly different look and feel than many native Android and iOS apps
> 
> The iOS screens look similar.

Yep, mistake due to rushing through stuff… Sorry, ‘bout that.

> 
> To me, both of these look (ha) correct...

Looks (ha :) ) as is you are correct.
> 
> Can you check the very latest version on the website (I haven't pushed
> all of the user manual changes to GitHub, yet)?
> 
> https://subsurface-divelog.org/documentation/subsurface-mobile-v3-user-manual/
> 

I did and found this:



Looks like a link tot the image was broken. Don’t know if it is just my Mac acting up.


> Thanks again for proof reading. I think the links are a really good
> idea!

No problem, glad to be of (some) assistance.

Martin
> 
> /D
> 
> 

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